yo 1st dude realli need 2 fix ya flow u just sayin ya words man u had sum good lyrics tho da intro was mean as shit yo i was feelin dat 4real fix ya flow tho cuz on da real if u aint got flow ppl not gonna b interested n da song

2nd dude-ya flow was good lyrics was kool work on ya delivery tho i kno i cant say much but have more emotion n ya voice

but overall it was a ok piece due to da flow of da first cat