i like your technique, but all your rhymes lame.
and the god of war aint you...... its a game you played.
so quit playin like u a master mind, your punches lazy...
man u once twice and three times the lady....
all boys round here are a pure rap genius.
but you kid? well your rhymes are just skeemless
Slim is great, but why throw bizkit in?
u didnt diss Lay once, so how u gonna do it again?
damn kid. if u got flow.. then i must be a legend...
but from your rhymes over months ive seen no progression...
i cant give u a second lesson cus i never gave you a first.
so lets make this the first and ill post it as a verse.
u need to reherse... seriously your lines are wack.
with your technique im not suprized you posted that...
im sure uve seen these lines some time before.
maybe in your other battles... but hey.. who is keeping score...

blah...... sucky shit

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