I wonder why no one else has responded to this one. I thought it was pretty good. I'm no expert on poetry but I know what I like reading. I liked how the lines were short on this but it was still descriptive.

"For your soul in turn will be
Crushed by the great
Sadness it will discover.
I may be enveloped in loneliness,
Swaddled in faithlessness
And content in lovelessness,"

I liked that part the most