flow is ok, but your energy is garbage....when you rappin, show love to wat you doing dawg, you sound like you tired and just trying to get shit done...take your time, and pick up your voice.....delivery was off....wasn't feelin the beat at all...drums on it was weak.....ummm i think if you put more emotion into this, and work on your deliver, it'll be a bit better....but it takes practice....stay up tho.....OnE





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