Honestly, I would congratulate you if I thought you really won, But I didn't. your verse was fuckin horrible. come on man, you wrote a verse about winning the olympics, with Pride as a topic... that's something my 5 year old nephew would think of. You came up with the most baaaasssssssiiiiiiiiicccccccc concept imaginable. your shit took absolutely no creativity what-so-ever to write. nothing thought provoking. your shit was like reading a 4th grade short story. Besides that, look at your weak AA BB CC DD EE FF rhymescheme... in which you only rhymed the last syllable of the last word of your line... weak status. The only thing you had on me is structure... wow. good job. Look beyond that, and you aint got shit on me. Where's your substance? You're nowhere near my level on that verse, let alone anything I actually spend time on. You couldn't drop that shit anywhere exept a dickriding board & have people think it's half decent man, and that's being real with you.

Pride the ultimate form of love, a great sense of belief
displayed when out olypmpians proudly wore victories wreath
or when a young male child is adored after his birth
joyful cries of love surround his fragile existence, inherit the earth
.:Pride to represent:.
As I kneel my vision focuses on the most chrished prize, gold
Before the gunshot time completely slows and nerves take hold
As my moment nears my muscles twitches with anticipation
One moment to start the run for glorification of my nation
As the shot rang my ears, my muscles keyed for this exact event
My vision narrowed to just the track, my opponents irrelevent
My heart pounded, harder than ever, my breaths sharp and quick
The end of the track nearing, and competition getting thick
Only the track, my body, and air fuel me to continue my quest
THe deed done, my lifes accomplishment, world records I have left
The ceromony in which they play the most beautiful song where my heart resides
I can only cry with joy as I accpet gold, the nations pride
.:Pride to Defend:.
As we move towards un-know enemy quarters, we silently wait
Our lives in the hands of leaders, enemies, and unshure fate
A simple mistake and were spotted a exchange of fire ensued
bullets sprayed the sand, confusion created, unshure of what to do
the next day unshure, probability of survival is close to zero
but no matter what Ill never stop fighting as Americas Hero


Pride's when you stay in the fight not wantin'a save your own life
By how you were raised & what ya know is right, they can tell humble while you're humming show tunes, to show you, you're moving up, be proud- no one likes a show-boat, stay in your zone without remaining local, concentrate, and maybe some day we'll know you, Stay on track, not just talkin bout laying vocals, Change the whole world without changing yourself, Money makes your world go 'round, but not everywhere accepts cash, Resent-mant from what were then-friends'll make things hopeless for when you do the hard work, n got stuff to show for it, Shit's tough, and you're supposed to ignore it, stuffed upto your throat holdin in emotions, going through the motions, won-dring how close you are to ex-ploding, is it too much to hold in, or just what you got going for you, seems like no one 'round heres pulling for you, no girls or nothings falling for you or calling for you, so you packed up your pride & swallowed it whole, Decided to follow the mold, tried it until,your upscale lifestyle blinded you pride, ya feel it's unreal- up 'til your blood spilled, never was one to know how being jeal-ous feels, just stayed on the grind, feelin like rusty wheels, while i ride in the hurst,eyes were closed as i learned my survival was cursed, read my bible at first - took my time and it worked, for the first time my pride didn't hurt, still it got worse as i desired and flirted with the idea of getting sent to the fire n burning, Luring my burdens out, but they're getting hid further in, i was sure, seeing what they do to me, heaven wouldn't let me in when the doorbell rings
Now i dont know what your personal hell brings, Mine's selling pride & opinons for 2 cents - spare change, to pay off this overwhelming debt to society cuz I wont change….. I don’t care what they say… Go ahead and lose me in the shuffle, I’m elusive and I want to be viewed useless, just to taunt you, fool you, then embark on my travels through the underworld…
Maybe they'll have somethin'a be proud of while looking down from above


judge for yourself.

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