Ok, maybe im seeing this differenetly, i really felt Madd's verse, a great concept, nice take on the topic, well thought out, really creative, a good writers voice and his direction was there, i got into his verse pretty deep, overall a great verse, props man.

Shiz, again - a lovely verse, you seemed to grasp the topic pretty nicely also brought that emotion and imagery into your piece, you really got deep into it, again, direction and writers voice were near perfect in this to me, i felt if you'd of wrote more you cvould of taken this because you seemed to improve as the piece went on, this was a close one to call but after all this

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sorry Shiz! i loved your verse, but as i said, if you'd of wrote more you would of taken this, his verse just seemed to grasp the topic a little nicer, a great verse though, dont be dissapointed in the slightest.

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