alright here's how I saw this.

Flow=xplicit, his structure was much better which made it an easier read.

Punches=xplicit, he had harder punches, and he also had more punches.

Personals=xplicit, he had more, and his were better. Idle, I didn't really see much personals from you.

Multies=xplicit, even though neither had that many, xplicit had more.

Vocab=I'm gona say Idle on this one, he at least tried to put some upper level vocab in his piece, xplicit your vocab was kind of rudimentary not to basic, just not on an upper level.

My vote goes to Xplicit