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Old 05-10-07, 09:04 AM   #11
DaTrusHurtz
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Since when did Tebo start movin up? Psssh... I don't know what that's bout
But he must be high on life... living in a renovated crack house
Look like it aint rain in years, umbrella's rusty, I figure it's a drought
But I got one question... How the hell's the pool bigger than the house?
It's piece of shit, ugly, weak, dirty, puny. Damn, it's like a mega mix.
All the kids hate him... this house made Toys R Us run out of Lego bricks
You dirty bastard. Goin 16's a lot, but you've been forgiven, now its cool
But judging from the water's color, Tebo musta been livin in the pool!

vs.

Fixed ya house to float but now your in a handyman slump
My pad's a chill spot for chicks, yours is to hold the candycane up
Willing to put up with middleage men & have propper talk
Stop beating around the pole... & go buy the whole barber shop

-Coop-, u came pretty decent here, some pretty witty shit.. lego brix was my favorite, but lots of good lines in there. Tebo, lines i quoted turned out pretty good. Like i told u on aim, there were a lot of other decent concepts in there, just the wording wasn't good enough to quote them so keep workin' on it, ur gettin' there.

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