R- nah man. some of that felt like i was readin a text battle and shit so it was very uninteresting. not much imagery and some bad lines definatly in there just wasnt feelin it at all...3/10
Chase- that was a very interesting story and it had bomb ass imagery i was just fuckin stumped to how someone could write that dope....especially a 13 year old. the tranisitions and shit was like, perfect. even tho the strechys gave u a ....9/10

not even close ...you fuckers happy now?

v//bigchase

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