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Old 05-06-07, 05:40 AM   #6
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Hmm, this was a nice battle, i enjoyed both reads so here we go :-

Faime S Quotez your verse was nice it had a nice rhythm and mood to it, it had a nice poetic feel it had some good emotion about it and precision wasn't to bad. Exact, your verse i liked also it had nice emotion and and anticipation about the piece as it go towards the end, your rhymescheme was ok and it was very well broke down, to give a verdict i will have to say i'm going to give this Exact purely on the fact that his verse was more powerful and it gripped me more, good battle.

Vote on the contendor battle please.

-Thomas.
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