Well, seems i've wasted my time in reading, yeah you can use multies but from what you've drop'd ya usage is wrong in more ways then one, for one if you wanna use multies properly you vocabulary should be up to par where you will not have to use slant rhyming not saying slant rhyming is a bad thing but the way you were talking i was under the impression you wouldn't use it but then agin i kinda figured you would use slant rhyming, another thing is your forcing your multies out and they should be natural when using them especially with a fucked up structure your using its hard to figure where you barz end and begin.

I.E. (Example)
'Why U Broke Bitch'
and 'I Tote Fifths' ya 'Diss to my multies was like stress weed! got me thinkin~ i dont wanna 'Smoke This'
i 'Spit Fire'~ 'Next Time' try to 'Fo-cus'

^^ Yours ^^

Norfolk, VA.....until 'My Casket Drops' This 'Laugh'n Stock'
This 'Laugh'n Stock' Ain't close or even ' Half as Hot'
'Burn Clowns' The 'First Round' Let the 'Magnum Pop'
So you can get the same 'Beating' That The 'Mavericks Got'

^^ Mines ^^

Next time you claim you can multie atleast do it right the first time so you wouldn't have to get feed like this. Good Day To You Sir.

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