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Old 06-08-05, 11:30 PM   #57
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drakel-this piece was perdy solid, i liked how you wrote it, it fell off at times with the flow but overall i was feelin the way you wrote it n your content, n dope way of putting the ending, props man...
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drama queen- i think you focused a lil to much on metaphoric value of your words n lost track of tellin something real
i got what you were trying to say but constantly your verse was jumpy n your ideas werent well rounded..
it was ok, but i was really feelin drakels drop the way he put things into perspective
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!