Well, definitely gotta give this to Revelation...dope ass verse...one of, if not the most creative I've ever seen.

Spoken: your verse was good. It had good imagery an interesting twist and solid vocab. Your structure made it hard to read at times, but it was still o.k. It wasn't a bad drop by any means, you just got outshined this time.

Rev: What can be said??? Great drop. Excellent twist. The plot mad the whole drop suspenseful and easy to read. Structure was great, imagery was great, and emotion was great. I' must say I think this piece was flawless.

v/The Revelation