listening:

Verse 1: nice, delivery's pretty nice.. and you go really good with the beat.. your verse is pretty smooth..

verse2: hahahah wow 2nd time i heard you rap.. and you got alot better than when you were before man.. much props lol.. you got alot better.. like seriously hahaha.. verse is good.. smooth verse.. n flow is good...but up your delivery..

chorus: its pretty cool

Verse 3: nice lyrics.. flow is good.. only a lil off jst a lil.. but try to show more emotion in the verse... and up your delivery a lil..

chorus

overal: its pretty tite... but u always use mainstream beats lol.. try using underground beats haha.. but pretty tite..