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Old 10-08-06, 12:52 AM   #20
Ryan Hughes
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You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved
Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league
^^Decent opener
got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
^^Eh.. not feelin this
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
^^good personal i like this one
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
^^naw
In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go
^^good
Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow
^^^nice i was feelin this
Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids
^^weak
This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate
Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes
^^naw..not really hard hitting
So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe...
U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show
^^noo
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something
^^^Good
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time
^^no
Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps
Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month
^^no at this closer weak


Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
^^good opener
U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy
^^haha...i liked this one
I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch
I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch
^^decent
BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth
^^lol good
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
^^Good i like this one
Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma
I have Braggin Writes...
... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama
^^nice
Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!
^^Naw i wasnt feelin this one
That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
^^Lol...this was a good use of the quote you had..i was feelin this
Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that
^^Decent
Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is
These days I don't know why people even vote...
... for ANY of ur verses
^^weak
The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming
^^okay
I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie
^^decent closer...

V/datrus...this was a good battle...pretty damn close...both came wit some good verse's...tav i like the father line shit was good and the champin the league..but ya verse feel off to me it was inconsistent wit fresh lines..trus came wit a tad bit better verse...i was feelin the ta line the kick out the league too...you get my vote..good battle to both of ya'll
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