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Old 02-02-04, 07:43 PM   #9
Se7eN
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Iight here's the 411 on this battle

Structure-Goes to Lyrical Jesus, cause Aesthetic was stretched out and his lines were to long

Flow-Lyrical Jesus cause his shit was shorter, easier to read, and juss flowed better

Punches-Tie Both had weak punches, but Lyrical Jesus got this by his punches not being played as much and not having been stretched out

Vocab-Aesth, cause his shit did have better words he rhymed wit, juss couldn't read his lines as well...........

Wordplay-Aesth, cause he did use catchy wordplay juss not able to read lines

Conclusion-Aesth probably would've won if he would've shortened his lines but he didn't and it killed him bad, because it was hard and complicated to read it, so shorten your lines Aesth.......

Vote-Lyrical Jesus
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