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Old 07-11-04, 07:53 PM   #10
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hott verses

lot
this was a nice verse and ur flow was pretty much flowin
but i believe u went a lil off topic.. and thats what the
problem was your verse was nice but you lacked any
thing meaning full..it lacked..emotion me reading this
felt like you had no emotion at all.. its hard to explain
7/10

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your flow was good and your verse had great emotion
and good structurei think you won byu having better strucutre
actually slightly better strucutre and emotion..
you guys were about even on flow
overall 8/10
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