Fuck you punk, you can't take a little critisism?
Ok I can see, you put a lot of time in it, and you thought it was the hottest shit right, but then Im sayin that son won. That shit happends man, ask anybody on this muh'fucka, I am anti hater. Your rhyme sounds like spoken word over the beat with no emotion, or regard for the beat. You got to ride the beat, feel that shit and blend that shit so it fits perfect. So many cats on here comprimise that to come up with a catchy punch or wordplay, and forget about the beat.

I ain't hatin son, don't ever accuse me of hatin I'ma tell it like it is always.

Shit I even voted for phate, who you guys say beat me last round! With that slow offbeat crap he put out. Ok I took the L , and came back, I didn't cry.

You reversed mixed up, and beat the sample up so much that I couldn't even tell it was the sample. Good Idea, bad break...