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Old 08-25-08, 12:36 PM   #4
Jay Rose
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the singin needs some work....you can sorta tell its hesitant....like you hit notes but it has no real emotion cuz you were prolly focusing too much on hitting the notes....

you get into the verse, and then it becomes flawless....

i agree with the lack of feed/no one caring on this site....its why i only come back every now n then....


the production is nice on this.....i can tell you put alot of energy in this to make it just right....


only real problem i have, is the explosion....sounds to muffled and fake....just look up a better sound bit for that one man....


this is some good shit, if you got some free time id like to hop on a song....

ima up some old shit so you can peep n shit
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dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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