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Old 03-22-09, 02:21 PM   #11
Jonathon
The Write Weight
 
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From: Word life = Poetry... bringing words to life.
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I'm confused?

Fuck yuu - eh, dude.. not so great honestly. i mean, i guess it was a new take on a topic like that, but where was the effort at man? it seemed like you were just like, 'fuck it, i gotta write for this, lets struggle it out'.. feel me? i really think you could've done way better than that. and if this is the truth though, i was in rehab too, but mine was a mix between jail and rehab, it isnt that bad, you could be in worse places, trust, i've been there. but yeah, keep writing bro, thanks for helpin out this week, im still really sick... but keep writing.

alpha - wow.. uh, wow.


i wasnt expecting this, it was really a story, quite a story. good job.. to say the least. i liked it, you really seemed to improve since last week. you had some nice little lines, the confessions were sick... i am proud of ya, lol... i figured this would be a lot closer but fuck yuu didnt seem to care this week and you dropped a lot better so... its kinda obvious how this week went.. =/

v/ alpha, good job
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