this actually was a good verse.. you had some creative punches in there and two nice presonals.. the flow was great and never fell off..ya struct was also great and your lines were perfect length... if you added even some more metas and wordplay into it you could make the verse even better and harder hitting... nice verse overall though.. and you will only elevate too, you are pretty good.. even check out some LLL battles and try to learn from them..

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