this was ok..

6/10

ur flow was oookay but could of been much better by useing multis that also help the flow...
concept was eeeh wasnt feeling it to much sorry fam...
the material didnt seem to good of a read either but ur flow was the best thing here i only speak the truth but u def can get better with practis and by useing multis also make sure ur SETUP lines are properly followed by a good DELIEVERY PUNCH that makes the verse fire....

good luck and keep droping them...