^^It's the polite phrasing which cracks me up^^

This was pretty basic, the topic was some standard stuff and the rhyme scheme was simplistic. A couple of lines didn't rhyme and the spelling was off in places, fair enough this isn't an english lessons but it makes to easier on the eyes when everythings spelt right. Try to boost your vocab and tackle a more original topic.

Keep posting, keep elavating and please rtf.