this is very tough to judge, i am not a fan of links in verses, because it takes away from actual talent with words and makin up punches, lady, had good punches, but the whole verse was links, no hate gurl, just a personal preference, but your vocabulary is well put together, and you have an original style, i just wish you wouldn't hide it in links....basically,umm, miss avy, i have no idea who you are, but i guess we'll be seein more of you, your verse was good, you used all the vocabulary and punches you needed to make up for not knowing youre opponent or this site well yet, i give you props for not using links as your whole verse,and using more vocab, and your punches were decent, i liked the last bar, and the haters take a bath bar,,readers know what you are saying by looking at your verse, not clicking on it....so, my vote goes to,,MISS AVY

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