pretty ill drop
decent rhyme scheme got a little choppy at times
suited the piece well though..
seemed like a kinda mellowed out piece in a way..which in turn suited the mellowed out rich mans actions
really liked the ending..very good twist
interesting read overall..

'The man laughs, his face shows a smile ..
he grabs for the money he dearly treasures.
With the stupidity of a child ..
the angel tells him his pick isn't clever.
^yep..nice

props