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...i'm da nicest...
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IP:
lyrically drunk...so my cerebrum'll have shots bustin-at-heads
shadow aint hard...ill crush Abs till his chest starts touching-his-legs
FLOWS WELL,BUT I DONT SEE ANYTHING HARD HITTING...
punches swerve RB is full of armless emcees...no one's feelin-ya-verse
im beatin your words...bitch ill cut the action...so i can weaken-ya-verbs
SAME GOES FOR THIS LINE
its more than alledged when i drop you'll be closer-to-dead
battlin flow is like a condom...your in way "over-your-head"
HAHAHAHA THATS SOME FUNNY SHIT
shadows your gay in every aspect...besides your pretty-lame
from your rhymes...to ya pic...right down to your shitty-name
LOL@SHITTY NAME,NOT HARD HITTING BUT KINDA SILLY
straight as an arrow in public...but he's a faggot-in-stealth
only way he'll "fuck with a pussy" is if he "battled-himself"
LOL MAY HAVE SEEN THE CONCEPT BEFORE
you came in this thread with hand on trig...then renigged-in-depression
cause unlike Mel and Dan....this bitch aint lethal-with-weapons
UMM..NOT FEELIN IT
and i hope you rehearsed ya verse before you started-dissin
ya verbs come worse and my intuition is that you-into-wishin
CLOSING SUCKS....WISHIN ? IT AINT GOIN ANYWHERE....JUST MULTIES
Kid grab a clue, I’m just fucking better than you
Shit, even killah asked me to lead your whack crew
PERSONAL,NOT REALLY A PUNCH
“Murder emcees religiously”? quit fronting dude
… cuz its more like begging admins to get peeps jewed
I DONT LIKE IT.....FRONTING DUDE/PEEPS JEWED DOESNT EVEN RHYME......U SHOULDA READ UR RHYMES OUT LOUD CUZ WHEN U READ IT,IT DOESNT FLOW.....ONLY THE LAST 2 WORDS MAYBE....
Win’s mine, my verses perfect hundreds, yours just 99’s
… shit’s not a compliment, just the last time I seen those lines
I GET IT...U DIDNT WORD IT PROPERLY..I WOULD'VE PUT YEAR IN THERE SOMEWHERE.....
I’m on a different level, you just gassed g,
So if I was your breath, you still couldn’t catch me
LOL,PRETTY GOOD
Leave me rattled? Couldn’t hit your own shadow
… and your hardest punches are in your topical battles
PERSONAL,NOT TOO HARD HITTING...ITS OK
This cats fucked up to put it mild, fucking pedophile
Kid skeet whenever he get in touch with his inner child
MAN,U COULDA USED A MUCH MUCH BETTER PUNCH WITH "INNER CHILD" LOL...U KILLED IT THOUGH.....NOTHIN HARD HITTING THERE
So its over, get going, you lost n its clearly showing
I put two in your head, really get that intelligence flowing
PRETTY GOOD WAY TO GET AT HIM .......GOOD CLOSING
CONCEPT IS A LITTLE PLAYED.....NOT IN THOSE EXACT WORDS....BUT U KNOW WHAT I MEAN
PUNCHES WISE,U BOTH HAD ABOUT THE SAME......I LIKED THE CONDOM LINE BY FLOW,N BATTLE URSELF WAS OK........SHADOW,CATCH BREATH LINE WAS STARIGHT...TOPICAL WAS OK,BUT I THINK FLOW HAD SOME OK PERSONALS TOO IF U LOOK AT IT,U HAD A BETTER CLOSE...I'D SAY PUNCHES ARE EVEN.....BUT WHEN I LOOK AT THE 2 VERSES,FLOW'S FLOWED BETTER ,SEEMED LIKE A MORE INTELLIGENT VERSE LOL@USING HIS NAME.....BUT YEA,HIS MULTIES WERE BETTER......SHADOW,U COULD HAVE WON IF U WORDED THAT YEAR LINE BETTER,AND THE INNER CHILD......U NEED WORK ON WORDING PUNCHES BETTER.....AND,INSTEAD OF USING PERSONALS AS PUNCHES,USE THEM AS SETUP LINES INSTEAD,SO TAHT WAY U CAN STILL GET A PUNCH IN EVERY BAR..........CUZ UR SETUP LINES ARE VERY VERY WEEK.........
VOTE =FLOW
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