Voted For: S.P

Phree-OK...bad.All your bars were simplistic.No complexity whatsoever.FLow was meh...nothing special about it.get rid of the "/"...just makes it look newbish.And in the interest line and jerkinit out lines...why did you put hypens for?If it was wordplay..then ya...but it wasn't.And get some decent personals to ridicule your oppenent..don't just use generic punches.

S.P.-Man...flow was way better than Phree's...but you also lacked punches.You were also basic and lacked complexity.And why did you put the stars(*) when you didn't explain anything?..Anyways..you get my vote for actually seeming to diss and having a non-newb structure.

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