Not enough posts to poll but, here's what I thought.......

The UnderRated took this....I thought he showed more creativity and came a little stronger with his punches and personals...JCB, not bad on the punches....but you came a little simple and played at times...try to elevate...yer structure also needs work...it seemed to flow okay, but was a pain to read... My Vote> The UnderRated ( better punches,creativity,structure,and a decent personal)

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