First verse- ROFL. Good job. The flow was super duper dope. You pulled it off realllly nicely.
Second verse- It was not contradictory to the first verse but definately clashing in terms of tone, a lot. But I see what you're saying. Flow was good still but not AS good.
Third verse- Again, too real. It wasn't funny though
Flow was cool and everything.
Okay, even though I feel you might have taken a fair share of shots at me,
, it was a pretty cool piece. Personally, I feel the middle verse was clashing too much with the others and should be taken out and extended into a whole different OM. But otherwise, good job
7.9/10