hmm decent the stucture was ight coulda been better the imagery was alright kinda feeling it but it didnt work out sometimes the words didnt make sense or just dint fit in that line at all but other den that i twas decent the vocab wasnt to great the emotion was nice and thats all there is to a topical really you kinda told a story but not really at the same time but it was just one of them kinda self explanitory dropes ya knah..

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