aye fam I see u running low on feed so I figured I'd help ya out....this beat is kinda amatuerish but its ah'ight...I'm liking ya energy....flow is simple but with that high energy delivery it works nice...lyrics are simple too but I feel where u coming from u spitting sum real epic shit....u def kinda went alot deeper lyrically with the simple flow u used but I'll give u a pass becuz the vibe is tight....I think your hook coulda used a melody...on this epic beat jus rapping the hook aint work...also it was too wordy u aint give the listen nothing to latch on too an sing along too, i.e. make it a HOOK...but ya delivery an energy was tight gave the song a ill vibe so the hook being subpar kinda goes unnoticed becuz time u get to it ya verse already got listener into song....good shit.

Return the favor plz:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240116

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