this kid like an angry mexican, cuz 'I' see is this (el)'L' in this battle comin up short in form,
u messed with the wrong girl, or u didnt know who TO-PIC, uh yea....ALMOST PORN//
(1sr line yes....2nd nah)
remember that? perverted it seems and a topical head? u a false-rhymer,
battlin me? i guess u didnt know 'what u was in for' like IN-MATES with ALZHEIMERS//
(nice wordplay points)
this aint ya day, pimpin....wow this man can do topicals! seems he stay bitchin,
52 and 9? but check this out imma 'scratch ya record' like dj's mixin//
(k)
how u conjure up them wins? i guess 'gatorades' not all thats in u, u stuck with the pipe inside-ya//
no wonder why this site is called RV, yall got nothin but ridaz//
(weak ender....but k)

sum- u had some wordplay in there....few personals.....flow was off a lil.....no multis...u had some lines that made me go ooh...complexity was there....punches were above avg....



Quit ridin on L.I. I'm tired of it.. just simply lay off me bitch...
But since sex makes a winner.. its no wonder she's all over my dick...
(k...weak opener)
Battling the best.. you gotta be crazy if you plan on makin a name...
Cuz you made it prefectly clear that your name describes your brains...
(k...nice one)
Cut the cockiness bitch.. your ranked high among the greats, still takin flight?...
Cause last time I saw.. you didnt even make it into Legends on yo Home Site!...
(ehh...k)
Sorry I had to merk the "best" from RW.. cause this "vet" aint even alright...
Bitch, the only time you were on top.. was in bed wit strobe last night...
(weak ender)

sum- wheres the complexity....wheres the thought in the rhymes??? oh well whateva...eh ur verse was pretty basic......u had personals but nuthin strong or what i havent seen before......no multis...no hard hittin punches......no wordplay.......nothin made me go oohh or wow......flow was cool tho

its evident lylwun took time to put thoughts in her verse....had complexity and personals......cool shyt....


v- lylwun

d.a.

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