Crysis - wow. this was sick. the way u combined the chord n the picks lines was fuckin so dope. drums were dope. vocal cuts fit in pretty much perfect. there were a couple sounds in sum of the background of the cuts that didn't fit perfect, but it was real minor shit. 9 / 10

auspicous - hmm. i understand sum of the concepts u were going for as far as the intro, but honestly, i wouldn't even worry bout intro's or transitions at your level. just take the drum loop, cut sum 4 -5 second pieces out of the samples and practice laying them over the drum loop. 1 /10

vote crysis

__________________
<B><font size=4 face="still time"><A href="http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/21stavenueproductions.htm">21st Ave Productions</A></font></b><font size=5> / </font><b><FONT face=gunplay size=4><a href="http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/knockoutzcru.htm">KnocKOuTz</a></FONT></SIZE></B>

<FONT face="bankgothic md bt" size=4> Exclusive Beats for Qualified MC's</FONT></SIZE>