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Old 01-24-05, 01:35 AM   #7
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your voice dont sound as clear as usual....

your flow goes well with the beat....

lyircs where kinda played......(speaking of your feel in lines...)

raise your vocals...or lower beat...i say oyu lower the beat a lil bit and raise your vocals a lil bit...

chorus......
you need to switch up oyur voice or add eckos...your chorus was good just couldnt tell it was your chorus.....most chorus's have eckos or they change there tempos...




alll in all...change up your speed and shit like that every now and then...you had like a lil bit off emotion...work on that shit....not your best work....
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