Voted For: Terumoto

Wow BPK, you need a lot of elevation, but I'ma try and help you with a few things. First of all, your bars are too short. Expand your bars and throw a little complexity in there. Any fuck/dick/suck lines are PLAYED, unless you can amazingly throw a new twist to them. Hit up some battles on here or google some, and see what it takes to make good punches.

Keep elevating!