this was a goodn battle right here



Fletcher-Good piece here homie.You didn't have to get to complex to write this piece and I like that.Also you had a good opener that opened my eyes to read the piece.And your Imagry was real good too.And the emotion in your piece was deep to.Your structure was real good and the way you use your vocabulary was good too.But I think that you could have when more creative with the topic.


Mentalz-Good shit homie I really liked reading your piece.To start it off you had a really good opener and it was real strong too.Your Imagry was real good too I could picture what was going on in the piece.And your emotion even though the piece was short was strong in this piece cuz I could feel it.And your structure was real good.And your use of vocabulary was good and complex.But you get my vote cuz your piece was more creative and complex.



V/Mentalz cuz his piece was more creative and complex

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