it's a sickening sight, i'll bring the gore when i grapple
forget bloodshed... the scene will be more of a castle
no one wants to go near this e-thug, we know that ya fake
with an AIM list of gangstas,
always seeing blocks over ya name

vs.

So all those bars that voters read....they'll actually be reminded
Every concept you attempt is naturally Feeble Minded
You know u should leave the bitch,guess love for a slut wont let you
But its a shame when RV leagues is closing faster than her legs do
Plus undressing chicks glance at cha body and vomit quick
Wont even buy the newspaper....after watching THIS comic strip
In this battle fuck a gun, you getting clipped and bruised
This kid is only a Sharpshooter emulating Bret the Hitman moves



.. to me that "beat the crap out of u" line is played as shit.

comedian didn't come that great. his opener would've worked better with something other than castle imo, but it was still fresh so i liked it. his downfall was having too many played lines. the mantle wordplay, the no show punch, raise the bar, trash man hav all been done before. n.taverez jus came with an all round better verse and takes this one easily.



v/ n.taverez