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Old 12-09-04, 03:02 AM   #14
Zeke
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This was feedback posted for ReBorn

IP:

Obviously Reborn Came Harder,The Vocabulary In His Verse Was Better Then What I Bin Seeing Around Here Lately,Structure Was Decent,And Metas In His Verse Was Dope, Plus I Like That Drag Queen Line Ha Ha You Klled Him On That,But Really I Liked His Vocabulary In His Verse It Was Sick....

Lil C.A.L.I
Wasnt Really Feeling Your Verse Sloppy As It Was,Structure Was All Over The Place, Vocabulary Was To Basic, Some Words Never Even Rhymed, The Flow Wasnt Even Working Kid One Man Bands Tutorial Will Help You Out,Personals?? Seriously That Shit Wasnt Working, Looks Like You Was Just Tryna Play Of His Name And It Didnt Work.....New Hobby Hommie, No Hate