lets see now...
this is pretty basic as far as vocab and stuff...
the concept is pretty decent....
the flow is cool but its really to simplistic like there wasnt enough creativeness to it...
u pretty much stood ont he topic but didnt do much with it either...

i see where you going with this topic and all but i would like to see more multis in there to make ya flow sound alot better... try useing some word-play to make ya creativeness seem alot better and a few meta's also helps...

the hook is cool...
the verse needs a bit of work but not a bad drop... 6/10

keep droping and pratics a bit more before u drop it re-read it and see if its to simplistic and try to change it...

i'll be looking for more drops...


go peep my drop called: calm the fuck down ( 300 J.G we running this rap shit )