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Old 02-18-05, 04:00 PM   #20
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all the verses appeared decent in a way. i wasnt feeling the vocab on any of the verses. troops vocab was the emphasis of his verse, daz's vocab was a little too adolesant, and prems was just decent. daz: toward the end of you piece the flow was lost. troop: stretched, prem: good flow. the only story that was self explanitory was daz, i had to read prems twice, and i had no clue what troop was writing about... because his sporadic vocab threw me off. no verse really stuck out to me, but with straightness, and a decent drop overall... im going with prem.

vote: prem
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