View Single Post
Old 01-24-05, 12:15 AM   #10
Terumoto
I have a lot to learn...
 
Terumoto's Avatar
 
Posts: 9,740
From: Life.
IP:

Im feelin the beat.
Quality is pretty good I guess.

DJ: Nice flow, nice lyrics. But your delivery wasnt too great. You sounded like you were bored... lol... Try work on emotion for the next track.

Trauma: Nice delivery and lyrics. Flow was mostly on but there was one point where it slowed unnaturally. I dunno if you mean to do it, but it just didnt sound right. Other than that, good verse.
__________________
  Reply With Quote