Alright..

Hoenstly, I wasn't really feeling either of your verses...

WillNova...Your structure was good, though stretched and too short in places. Your vocabulary was okay in places, but in alot of parts it was pretty basic. You kinda related to the topic, but I felt that you could have followed it a bit more. Overall, it was an okay verse. the second half I thought didn't make much sense, but it was decent.

Kid Sense...Your structure was way too stretched. Your lines were like full sentences...try to avoid that. Your vocabulary was decent in places, but basic in most. Use of imagary was kinda there...but I wasn't feeling your verse much at all. You did not stay on the topic very well either.

Overall...both need to elevate, but I think Willnova took this.

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