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Old 08-20-08, 11:54 AM   #6
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Who the fuck?
I peepd ya matches - Ionno wtf you thought, cuz'..
But if ya shit 'sfeared - then my shit's baseball bats and golf clubs..
Lol, this was some tight wordplay. Well worded punch, I liked this a lot.
When I pull out - I'mma bust until this fag screams out he'on want nomore..
I ain't perverted - we all just hope I creep ya verses out, and evasively shut the door..
Cocky swagger, the wording could've been better.. but in general it was a nice punch.
Forfeit or feel four fists til' ya eye gleams..
I'll make it Sting til it rocks facepaint, does the Scorpion Death Lock, and skydives in the rinnng..
lmao.. I may be biased to this because I think wrestling punches are sweet.
Ngga - my fuckin' fist is just viscous and raw..
I'll beat you to within the inch of your life..
...........THEN feed that baby dick to my dog..
Nah, this was some weak shit man.
Those played concepts can't save you now..
You're old shit is a hoax..
..Infact, I swore they were drowned at a Salem Trial..
I'm almost 90% sure someone will say this doesn't rhyme, but IT DOES. The punch itself though was too basic and had no real power to it.
I hate you clown - and the set-up of ya rhymes, should be burned alive..
My winning votes here - 'slike heads usin' ya style - it'll stop around '05..
The concept was cool, the wording was completely fucked up I thought.
so pleeeaaase - I'll be moving on to the next round to make heads fly..
While this ngga here's tryin his hardest find a dope way to word "Ed Die"..
Lol, not the best but it has an element of humour about it. It is a definite "closer" punch.


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ya chicks packin baggage, dont' brag bitch I'd rather jus fued
shit faggot..even ya girls Figure of speech is fucking fatter than you
Not to clown on this punch, I'm sure others will find it funny.. however, because I know who Eddie is and I know he isn't fat.. this punch lost its power.
noone even noticed your whore, shes ugly an I'll be boastin some more
ya know its reached its Boiling point..when ya girl's STILL coated wit Sores
I wasn't really feeling this at all, sorry.
faggot thinks he's a movie star, Samuel Jackson?..you ain't real so move
butt Eddie's in Shaft?..but backwards that statement simply reveals the truth
OMFGLMFAO!! This punch was raw as fuck, best of the battle.
while your compared bitch..'Eddie' we know your gay cuz ya files coherent
take ya outa special Ed,..leave ya wit Die like queers usually style their hair wit
So, yeah.. this punch just wasn't hitting for me.
all that streched shit, lines stickin out.. that'll just cause you to lose son
I know ma fists Structure verse pretty hard..but didn't realize youd fail to use one
Played concept, but flipped nicely.
its new homo..you want in vtl? you want out?..so choose a week to quit
an I wish you'd Make up your mind..but then it'd be familiar with ya cheeks an lips
Nah, the wording was off and the concept was weak.
your weak admit, styles legit? I'll pummel you til ya head rings like this
try to copyright..but to mimic me ya gotta learn how to NOT swing like a bitch
This was a decent closer.



So, I really hope this battle doesn't succumb to the curse of chain voting... because it is close I know, but I honestly have Eddie taking this battle. Lay said he was coming hard in the playoffs and this week.. I don't know.. his verse just doesn't seem to be hitting that hardness that I am used to seeing his verses doing. I thought he had a couple of shit concepts, he flipped a played concept nicely.. he also had the best bar of the entire battle.. but overall his verse wasn't nearly as good as I would expect from him. Also, the fat punch at the start lost its meaning on me because like I said.. I know for a fact that Eddie is not fat. Others might like it though. Eddie didn't come close to as hard as I've seen him come in previous battles. He is a raw battler, but this week he seemed to coast with an above average verse. He had a few punches that I liked, they weren't spectacular, but they definitely made me laugh. He had a general cocky swagger that I've seen him use before, and overall his verse was just more appealing to me. The sphered and sting punches were his best, they both had me laughing.

So....

Vote: Eddie
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