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Old 06-21-03, 06:35 PM   #14
AlcaTrakz
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Blak -

intro is funny..but doesnt help winning...intros are just for fun...and if theres an issue, such as BITING...then you should clown him in the audio...

"bitin my shit"...thats not really a clever line....

"ride a beat / with a seat" BOOOOOOO

"text style / textile" line was cooo

"wrappin sloppy and fast" were coo

outro was mad funny..but again doesnt add to anything....because you didnt say anythign about him singing in your actuall verse....


Martinelli -

"pathalogical ine..." ok

"piss on faec line" funny

"titanic line" ok

"monkey" line was funny

"pay admission" line was funny

"stereo type" line was ill


i gotta go with martinelli on this one..barely edged it....

if blak woulda actually put dope lines in his verse ABOUT the biting and singing, it woulda been a wrap....

[b]Vote - Martinelli
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