fuck the tag on it... i almost used that same beat but i hated the tag lmao...
now... lets see... u sound too mono tone... try to apply some feeling. productions wise this aint real great. need to work on ur mixing an shit. it really sounds like ur talkin through a toilet paper tube... just do some research on mixin an try new stuff.
rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238373