hotshh!
Rippin da Jacker, with elbows and low blows below the Waist Kid
Im takin Head out da game quicka than pitchers wit Loaded Bases
open was too polite...decent
He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough
By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck
haha. Fiya
Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters
O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER!
ha, ok...step it up
See Headgames was lame... his status couldnt pay Dividends
Came back a 'new man', this is just The Bitch in him Revisiting
so so, flow was juggled
Final Four is like the NBA playoffs, stayed long but Leave Fast
So I'm sending "Sun" home for the summer, Like Steve Nash*
good
Or maybe I'll lose....... and Jack'll prove to be the Better Man
With all those D/R's, ya ass gets fingered like Wedding Bands!
haha, another hit
"Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted
Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included
dope bar
Your elevation proves you only stood up to get Knocked Down
So U'd have to a go to da dentist, just to say u got "Crowned"
closing with this line was ite, could have been great

*this verse for the most part was fire. real good punches,
the personals came in every line. shit was hot. the comdey
was a plus, had my chuckle a few times. word. umm real
hot verse, the flow was juggled in a line or two. but again
for the most part, ya verse was FIYA... 91%

Jack The Ripper
We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway
Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away
good open, not special
Ya, hot is fucking gay, so i'll pound your chest like fucking apes
Cuz MaRVJay got hotshit over his dick like sweaty prison rapes
bar wasnt bad, i just didnt like it
He's not respected, falls short to legend, dawg is frowned upon
Cuz saying the best look up to shit... is defined as an oxymoron
oxymoron = most used punch-word, but still a good bar
Come on son, "Da medicine man" is really wack, I been watching
Give hotshh! a taste of his medicine and lower his coffin(coughin)
ite, again...nothin special
Your not pimp, and not much of a baller either, ya skills is ass
Cuz hot couldn't catch a dime... if J-kidd threw him the pass
haha, good
Lack the sex-drive, not really a stud, hotshh! man please behave
Cuz the only time he's fucking bitches dead
...is after he's dug up their grave
new concept, was that relavent though?[b]
C'mon kid, a loss in the final four again, lemme hand you a clue
Your like last place marathon finishers
...you've come so far just to lose
[b]confidence is good
Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin
Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in
haha, ite...good shit

*you worked completely different than hotshh! here. ya
verse was good. i liked the confidence as well.punches
were hot, but you had a little more filler than hotshh!.
the more personals you can intertwine with ya punches
the better. and thats the tie breaker here. good read,
especially the closuer...good shit. but my vote still goes
to hotssh! for less fill and more comdey....88%

vote: hotshh!

good shit yall & good luck.

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