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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP:
despite-ur-hustle..he doesn't know the same thing is twice-and-double...
i know u dont like-to-struggle but ur the guy who made us lose to Ike-and-Buddha...
^^forced a bit, n not quite multi syllable ryhmes..despite/twice/like/ike,
close but these are assonasance rhymes..
i spit muties and talk-trash...while when you see me you walk-fast...
he aint jus part-fag, he's gay to the full..n u dont wanna see the spark-blast...
^^1st line had multi's but second was forced n didnt match up
so wit no hesitation..have acceptation to this battle or get an operation...
wit a gun thats my self incrimination..i'll leave no witnesses for attestation...
^^no multi's in here,
when you plex-it-vary cus everyone knows this kid Dex-is-scary...
your text-get-carried away becuz this shit is for peeps that's legendary...
^^almost again, you need 2 multi's per line, 1st line was ok but ya
2nd fell off right at the end.
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no bars were multi syllable rhymes through n through, some single lines had
2 multi's that were proper but fell off in the end of the bars....
you dropped mainly assonasance rhymes man.....
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Vital statistics say -Simply the best- The title here lies fool, u in a trifle
Think u cool, i no ur a preschool toadstool in a dex lead whirlpool of strife
^^wasnt feelin this at all
Don’t BANK on wrecking my record, cos we defintley sceptical of ya METHods*
“I am wat I say I am”, sig talks of music video filmed on ya nicam eyecams **
^^nope, ya layouts all outta wack dex
wateva your dollar level you’ll never afford to really gain your “net” record***
Get off red bulls nuts, he leads u but sucks red bells on a bull and gets heckled****
^^no, your treating this like a normal battle dawg,
weres the vocab n multiple syllable rhyme scheme.????
Stop fucking fronting, unless u’ll do somethin, I run things here so lets jump
If blunts is being the opposite of cunts, I wont stunt u really do “smoke blunts”*****
^^all assonasance rhymin here,..??...
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well seems you both did the same thing in terms of not pullin off multi's
in accordance to the rules...but c-bo had more n seemed to grasp the concept better....
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vote/c-bo, but both need to elevate there multi's alot...pz...
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no hate just elevate....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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