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Old 08-27-05, 09:46 AM   #12
Dizzee Rascal
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Apos
You have a remote chance to win.. Cause EC your a slouch...
kid your losing control of this battle.. and its not between the couch

Remote control line? Seen the concept too many times

EC wants to go 10... but i'll be killing him in 2 bars for sure...
cause when i told E to think outside the box.. he started writing by the poor..

Re-wording but still outside the box lines need re-wording dopely for them to be effective now days

EC its a fact your ill.. but its nothing that cant be fixed by a lowely nurse..
and you were soo fucking stumped.. you had to uproot your whole verse..

See i thought this was pretty tight

You dont get any feed on your stuff.. cause its clear no one gives a shit for E..
And you could get casted for star trek.. and not Cling-On to the Victory...

Again played concept

Taking the UK by storm.. nah a little sprinkle doesnt count you lame.
Even on RV your a no name.. So its pretty obvious.. the EC will never reign..

Nice.

Overall i felt alot of played concepts, felt u needed good wordplays on his name for a more effective verse

E.C
in english litteracy grammer gets you all the answers,
aposprophe's only above our lines becuz his texts below our standards,

Nice concept not a hard hitter though

i knew rv was full of homo's these people just get me vexed,
apos was in the elite 8 only coz he liked getting his willy wet*,

Meh

verses are weak, people don't wanna read it, scrap ya lines,
coz you have to make them big, for it too catch their eye,

Week personal

see, willy likes to get rode, so he looks for tackle to grab,
obviously it's true coz he wins all the battles he has,

eh...

let me exclaim ya ego(!) ill miss w(')rds and laugh,
coz this lesson in school questions(?) all the skills you have,**

Nice

Overall - Ok im being harsh with the break down but fuck it im tired of played concepts etc
But this was hard a played but alright verse vs some failed attempts
think Apo got this E.C didnt come up to his usual standards with some wierd attempts which werent ever gonna hit
Stay up both vote - APO
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