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Old 09-07-10, 02:26 PM   #4
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Ok I'm actually going to drop a detailed vote because I don't want the drama from the last round (which my gripe was about detail in votes not hate please ichaboy you're an aight dude if I'm honest).

But here it goes,

Colas bar was good I liked the 'know this' 'notice' rhyme scheme and the punch itself was a good one...preferred the fact as well you kept the writing normal sized as the last round despite shrinking the verse...it didn't change the fact it was still stretched.

Ichaboy I feel like seeing as though you saw his bars 1st you really had the chance to counter his verse with a decent punch of your own...I felt let down by it because it just didn't hit hard mate. The structure was good and was easy to read (flow wise) but it was more of an attack on Cola rather than a thought out punch.

V/Cola

Re-Edit: in the interests of fairness I've removed my previous statement.
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