TheFlowIsSick - Loved the verse. It had allright imagery, could have done better but was still pretty good. You stayed on topic perfectly. The flow and the vocabulary was excellent. Some good multies in your verse which was well structured as well. You made a really good verse here.

For too long I've been living a life of misery, My strife is history
So i grab the knife blissfully, At first it slices, Then kisses me

^ I loved those 2 lines.

Tony Green - I'm guessing that you are just starting to get into topicals. Your verse was very basic and could use a lot of elevation. Your structure was kind of off in parts too. The vocabulary was basic, and there wasn't much imagery either. Some attempts a good ideas, but you need to elevate at topicals.

I wanna have a conversation with Marvin Gaye.
I wanna see Rick James and hear those famous words he say.(I'M RICK JAMES BITCH!)

^ Not feeling that at all man. Know what I mean, not really mood setting or anything.

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